an origin story


I dashed up the stairs as the slime dripped through. My best chance of surviving was to get out of this house… But how? I realized I still had my training cuff on my wrist, using the sharp edge on it to cut through the glass skylight. I was running out of time as the slime was already up to my feet. Finally I broke through the glass. I climbed through and realized I had done what I needed to because the only person who could promote me was standing before me. “Welcome to the 00 program agent 001.”

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  1. Annabeth1 May 2017 at 09:29

    You need to capitalize the 'my' and 'but' in this sentence. my best chance of surviving was to get out of this house… but how?
    Capitalize 'welcome' and put a period at the end of your sentence, “welcome to the 00 program agent 001”
    In this sentence, I realized I still had my training cuff on so I used the sharp edge on it to cut through the glass skylight. Maybe you can change it to read, I realized that my training cuff was still on my wrist and using the sharp edge, I tried to cut through the glass. In the sentence after that, you can add the word but.

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