Who knew?


I sat there staring at the plate of the most bitter chocolate chip cookies I had ever tasted. I didn’t want to break it to her since she had baked them herself and had given them to me with the sweetest smile. but I just couldn’t eat something so bitter. suddenly I thought of an excuse. “ Sorry sweetie but does this have eggs because I am a vegetarian.” she looked slightly sad but then went to go give them to her friends. who knew being a teacher would be so hard?

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  1. In your first sentence, I sat there staring at the plate of the most bitter chocolate chip cookies I had ever tasted. You should write it out to read, I sat there, staring at a plate that was filled with the most bitter chocolate chip cookies I had ever tasted. You need the capitalize your sentences. but I just couldn’t eat something so bitter. suddenly I thought of an excuse. she looked slightly sad but then went to go give them to her friends. who knew being a teacher would be so hard?

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