THE NECKLACE
The
necklace
I sat on my bed staring at the
necklace grandma had given me the last time we met.
She always wore it, she said
“Whenever you
need a light in the dark just look in your heart” which was sweet since the
necklace was the shape of a heart. She believed in magic, but I however did not. Suddenly the necklace started
glowing a pale yellow, enveloping me
in light. What I saw when they light subdued was remarkable. I had discovered
the land grandma told me stories about. Then I noticed I had wings I gingerly touched the feathers. What a
beautiful place.
i think you should put a comma between necklace and grandma so like this I sat on my bed staring at the necklace, grandma had given me the last time we met. overall nice story..
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