time travel

I had gotten used to time travel. All I had to do was what Merlin told me. Think of the place you want to be and only the place you want to be, don’t let your thoughts wander. But how could I not let my thoughts wander today? Today was my first day at a new school, but I had a mission and I could not let feelings get in the way. I think of Merlin and concentrate on him suddenly I stopped. I looked around and saw space. Oh no I wasn’t concentrating on Merlin now I’m trapped. I looked in front and behind. Which way?



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  1. summer9 January 2017 at 09:28

    after you wrote "I had gotten used to time travel." you have to capitalize the "all". and if merlin is a name you have to capitalize the "m".

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  2. Annabeth11 January 2017 at 17:11

    Your not supposed to use contractions so no 'couldn't'. And 'time travel' should be capitalized.
    Interesting story though.

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  3. Juniper12 January 2017 at 13:27

    -you can't have contractions change could to could not

    -capitalize the A in all
    -
    I think you should change "Oh no I wasn’t concentrating on merlin now I’m trapped I think" to "Oh no, my mind was on Merlin, I don't know where I am,"

    -and you should change I looked down and see space to I looked around and saw an empty space

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